letter to Human Rights Campaign -overseas support for Taiwan same sex marriage-

最後編輯:2016-12-05 建立:2016-11-28 歷史紀錄

 

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TING-AN LSubject: Asking for your support for Same-sex marriage in Taiwan

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JUNE LDear [ ],

 

TING-AN LMy name is ____. [自我介紹] I am writing to ask for your and [機構名]‘s support in pushing forward with legalizing same-sex marriage in Taiwan. Yesterday [換時間] (Nov. 28th), nearly 20,000 Taiwanese gathered outside the Parliament, demanding Taiwanese government to legalize same-sex marriage by amending the Article 972 of the Civil Code. It is now a crucial time for the LGBTQ community in Taiwan since, as a pioneer for marriage equality, Taiwan may become the first country to legalize same-sex marriage in Asia.

ANGEL CI changed LGBTQ "group" to LGBTQ "communities" for the purpose of consistency throughout the document.

    Jiàn-gēng Chiōu--> Changed the support particle to "in" as it is grammatically correct this way. Further, "Demanding Taiwanese government..." should read: "demanding that the Taiwanese government legalizes same-sex marriage..." (again, this would be grammatically correct).

JUNE LTaiwanese has been advocating for marriage equality for decades. In 2005, legislator Hsiao Bi-Khim first introduced the same-sex marriage bill. Through the 2016 presidential election, people elected the candidate of Democratic Progress Party (DPP), Tsai Ing-wen, as the president, who clearly promised to advocate for LGBTQ rights and the legislation of same-sex marriage during her campaign. After the election, we held the largest LGBTQ Pride parade in Asia this October, and same-sex marriage has become a cross-party consensus in the congress. As a result, the two largest parties in Parliament, the DPP and the KMT, along with the third largest party, the NPP, have introduced the bill to amend the Civil Code, aiming for legalizing same-sex marriage.

    Jin-Hao Jhang
    Jin-Hao JhangFew comments here. I think "rights for LGBTQ and marriage equality during..." can be formed as "LGBTQ rights and the legislation of same-sex marriage during..." to be more specific for readers.
    Jin-Hao JhangAlso we use Congress or Legislative Yuan? I would suggest just use Congress.
    Angel ChengIn my opinion, rather than using congress, either using the Legislative Yuan or the parliament stays closer to the structure we have in Taiwan. Per New York Times, they've used the Legislative Yuan in recent coverage of the marriage equality bill.
    favoniaI changed "improve" to "advocate for"
    Divina Alexiou"Taiwanese has been advocating for..." should be: "The Taiwanese have been advocating...". Then: "Through the 2016..." should be "During the 2016 presidential election, the people elected the candidate of Democratic Progress Party (DPP), Tsai Ing-wen, as the president. During her campaign, President Tsai Ing-wen clearly promised to advocate for LGBTQ rights and the legislation of same-sex marriage.) "a bipartisan sense of congress" is confusing to me. I do not understand what is meant. Does it mean that it is a polarizing issue?

However, after the bills were introduced, a few anti-LGBTQ religious groups have begun protesting against the legislation. They spread hatred, fears, lies, and rumors against LGBTQ communities, who are only seeking equality and basic human rights. These anti-LGBTQ religious groups have also initiated lobbies in an attempt to stall the amendment process. Unfortunately, the Tsai Government has started to hesitate; they may opt for a "separate but equal" civil union law, which was a painful road in the U.S. history with the policy of apartheid. That is why nearly 20,000 Taiwanese took to the street protesting on 11/28/2016, a working Monday morning. The Taiwanese are yearning for real equality, not a sugar-coated law that perpetuates discrimination.

    Ping Hogan Wang I'm not exactly sure what "a painful road for the US with the policy of apartheid" alludes to. Do you mean the history of racial segregation? Since it's in the past, it would be better to frame it as "in the US history."
    Divina AlexiouI agree with the above comment that apartheid has no place here as it belongs to South African history. Further it is a racial problem, not a sexual orientation problem... I would recommend to use an argument that supports the case against civil union law and not use a historical example. For example: "Marriage (vs. a civil union) brings with it clarity in communication to all others about the status of the couple, and furthermore protects their dignity based on equality with all other human beings that enjoy this right. Moreover, a marriage (vs. a civil union) affords portability, meaning that citizens' marriage is recognized beyond the borders of their own State and ensures they will not encounter problems with recognition or desire to separate, affords more legal and financial benefits than a civil union, provides broader access to public benefits, allows spouses to make decisions for each other when necessary and provides clarity to state documents in which you must identify yourself as a member of a family unit." (something like that can be effective.. please feel free to make shorter or delete as you wish..)
    Angel ChengI suggest changing the last section of the last sentence from "a sugar-coated law that carries discrimination." to "a sugar-coated law that is inherently discriminating." since we are referring to the problematic nature of it being separate but equal:
    Divina Alexiou "against the LGBTQ community" would be better than plural (communities).
    Jiàn-gēng ChiōuI suggest taking away the referendum part, as it is not obvious that the referendum law in Taiwan is too strict to truely represent public opinion.

 

(As a bisexual Taiwanese-American myself, ) I hereby seek your and [機構名]support earnestly. Since [機構名] has done tremendous work for the LGBTQ community and has been an indicative organization in the world, your support would mean the world to us and the LGBTQ community in Taiwan. We sincerely hope that [機構名] would support us by:

 

a. Issue a public letter to urge the President and Premier of Taiwan to ensure that they pass the amendment to the Civil Code.

b. Join us in our gathering at [各地聲援活動]

c. Allow us to take a photo with you and our campaign poster. [約時間帶著template去找他們拍照]

 

JIÀN-GĒNG CWe hope that you will consider the following statements when choosing to support Taiwan in achieving marriage equality for all people:

CHIEH-TING Y1. Taiwan is on the edge of achieving marriage equality, with bipartisan support.

2. With Taiwan's vibrant democracy, this step toward marriage equality has a symbolic significance in Asia. As a pioneer, Taiwan can show the world that marriage equality is possible in Asia.

3. The Taiwanese government may opt for a "separate but equal" civil union law, but the [機構名] should remind Taiwan that separation is inherently discriminating.

4. As Dr. Martin Luther King Jr. said, "injustice anywhere is a threat to justice everywhere." This is why the [機構名] 's direct and firm support for human rights is needed to help eradicate the social injustice experienced by members of the LGBTQ communities in Taiwan. We ask that you join us in solidarity to help achieve legal protections for Taiwanese same-sex couples' right to marriage equality.

 

    Divina AlexiouI would change to "We hope that you will consider the following statements when choosing to support Taiwan in achieving marriage equality for all people:
    Divina AlexiouFurther, I would keep the US painful road out of there...

 

JIÀN-GĒNG CStarting with a press conference in Washington DC, participants more than 20 cities in the the UK, Germany, the US, Canada, Australia, and Japan (See attachment for detail) are gathering in the next two weeks to support the amendment of the Civil Code. We hope to convey our support to the Taiwanese LGBTQ community as well as legislators and activists who are still fighting for marriage equality. If possible, we would also greatly appreciate the attendance of you and your friends at the [機構名] at one of our gatherings. [或換成當地自己的活動]

 

JUNE LThank you very much for your time and consideration. I look forward to hearing from you soon.

 

TING-AN LSincerely,

xxx

 

    Divina AlexiouWhat will happen with the final paragraph beyond the 30th of November? It has already passed...

 

 

 

 

 

    Chieh-Ting YehAlso have a very specific ask: what do we want HRC to DO for us? Issue a public letter to urge President and Premier of Taiwan to ensure amendment to Civil Code passes, would be a good start I think.
    Chieh-Ting YehMake sure you put the "ask" in the very beginning of the letter.
    Chieh-Ting YehIf so, then the letter should focus on these points:
    Chieh-Ting Yeh1. Taiwan is on the edge of marriage equality, with bipartisan support
    Chieh-Ting Yeh2. It will have a VERY important symbolic significance in Asia, to show that even in socially conservative/traditional East Asia, marriage equality is possible
    Chieh-Ting Yeh3. Taiwan may opt for a "separate but equal" civil union law, but the HRW should remind Taiwan what a painful road that had been for the US
    Chieh-Ting Yeh4. As Dr. Martin Luther King Jr said, injustice anywhere is a threat to justice everywhere, and that is why the HRW is compelled to speak up in support for human rights in Taiwan.
    Chieh-Ting YehOnce you have the letter I would pass it on to Nadia and other Taiwan media outlets.
    汪澤民